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好不容易寫完作文后，覺得自己寫的實在太 low，不忍閱讀，但也不知如何修改？然后讀完考官范文之后，有時不知好在哪里，有時又覺得寫的太好，自己只能“望而卻步”？?
事實上，在寫作備考過程中，寫作范文是非常重要的參考資料，而劍橋雅思真題中給我們提供的考官范文又是我們心中Z權威的高分文章，在C4-C14 這11本書中，有關Task 2 的文章僅僅只有15篇，數量十分之少，那就更需要我們去充分利用，下面我們就來結合C8T1這篇文章來分步講解一下如何讀懂并運用考官范文來提高寫作水平。
01.仔細審題?列出提綱
題干如下：
Some people think parents should teach children how to be good members of society, while others believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
這是一道非常典型的雙邊討論題目，那么我們準確審題之后，可以先對題目進行一下簡單構思并嘗試寫出大綱，比如：
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開頭—引出話題：?家長和學校誰來負責教育孩子成為好的社會成員；
主體1—討論觀點1：?家長對孩子的啟蒙影響。
主體2–討論觀點2：?學校能提供更專業的教育。
結尾—總結并表明個人立場。（可以二者選其一，也可以二者合作教育）
02.通讀范文?梳理文章思路
在我們自己對題目有了一定的思路和分析之后，帶著自己的想法先通讀一遍范文，分析其中的邏輯結構，列出范文提綱與自己的版本進行對比，范文如下：
A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.
In order to be a good member of any society the individual must respect and obey the rules of their community and share their values. Educating children to understand the need to obey rules and respect others always begins in the home and is widely thought to be the responsibility of parents. They will certainly be the first to help children learn what is important in life, how they are expected to behave and what role they will play in their world.
However, learning to understand and share the value system of a whole society cannot be achieved just in the home. Once a child goes to school, they are entering a wider community where teachers and peers will have just as much influence as their parents do at home. At school, children will experience working and living with people from a whole variety of backgrounds from the wider society. This experience should teach them how to co-operate with each other and how to contribute to the life of their community.
But to be a valuable member of any community is not like learning a simple skill. It is something that an individual goes on learning throughout life and it is the responsibility of every member of a society to take responsibility for helping the younger generation to become active and able members of that society.
詳細梳理范文提綱：
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開頭：（點出話題）成為好的社會成員—個人觀點暗示：不止是家長的責任。
主體1：（承認）家長是第一個教育孩子尊重和遵守社會規則的人。
主體2：（反駁）學習理解和共享全社會的價值體系不能只在家里完成，要更大的集體。
結尾：成為有價值社會成員是個人在一生中需要不斷學習的，每個社會成員都有責任幫助年輕一代成為積極能干的社會成員。
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通過對比我們會發現，范文始終緊扣“成為好的社會成員”所需要的品質，從小的community到大的 whole society 來分別論證家長和學校在其中分別扮演的角色，?同時文章Z后還有遞進，認為除了家長學校的教育之外，成為好的社會成員還需要個人努力和其他社會成員的幫助。
03.精讀范文?整理高分表達
了解了范文寫作思路之后，我們還需要再次回到范文中進行“精讀”，并整理其中的高分詞組和句型，比如：
......has?never been about .....only/alone.
respect and obey the rules of their community
be widely thought to...(do).
be expected to behave
share the value systems of a whole society
they are entering a wider community where...(where ?引導的定語從句）
people from a whole variety of backgrounds from the wider society
這里要強調一下大家這次讀文章的時候可以借助朗文英英詞典去理解詞組意思和用法，不要只記憶孤零零的“單詞”，而是要記憶“短語或句型?”（collocation ? and sentences), 自己寫作中直接使用固定詞組效率更高，并可以提高文章地道性。
04.打造個人范文
到了這里，還有一些學生認為整理完表達也背不下來或者無法運用到自己的寫作中，那么這時候Z后一步就比較重要了，我們可以借助上面的范文提綱和高分表達，嘗試二次寫作本題，打造出自己的個人范文，畢竟我們對自己寫的文章印象更深刻！
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