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托福綜合寫(xiě)作回憶和解析含范文  本文內(nèi)容由培頓 教育上海學(xué)校嚴(yán)春華老師整理提供，本次寫(xiě)作綜合點(diǎn)評(píng)：這次托?？荚噷?xiě)作部分整體難度適中，其中，綜合寫(xiě)作考查社會(huì)科學(xué)類，整體難度適中。

　　綜合寫(xiě)作

　　話題分類社會(huì)科學(xué)類

　　考題回憶總論點(diǎn)富蘭克林的水手死于鉛中毒

　　閱讀部分富蘭克林的水手死于鉛中毒，

　　Franklin's sailors died and were found lead poisoned in their bodies. Some people think it was because the canned food.

　　閱讀給出三個(gè)原因：

　　-lead not in contact with food，鉛是用于罐頭表面，而食物在里面，不會(huì)受到其影響

　　-no other report，當(dāng)時(shí)的其他船員也都會(huì)食用這種罐頭，假如真的因?yàn)楣揞^不可能只有這一例中毒案件

　　-one other possible result，船上的凈水系統(tǒng)的管道是鉛做的，所以有可能是凈水系統(tǒng)出問(wèn)題了

　　聽(tīng)力部分聽(tīng)力一一反駁：

　　-罐頭工人工作非常忙，在很短時(shí)間生產(chǎn)很多罐頭，所以會(huì)非常疲憊和粗心，導(dǎo)致罐頭表面的鉛進(jìn)入食物里面

　　-沒(méi)有其他報(bào)告的原因是其他人沒(méi)有檢查，假如檢查或許一樣會(huì)有鉛中毒的案例，而且由于鉛中毒的癥狀并不特殊，是頭疼，所以很有可能被忽視或被誤解為是其它原因引發(fā)的病癥。而且，既然其他艦隊(duì)沒(méi)有鉛中毒死亡，可能他們體內(nèi)已經(jīng)有很多鉛了，只是沒(méi)達(dá)到死亡的量罷了

　　-船上的凈水系統(tǒng)是為機(jī)器提供水的，并沒(méi)有用于 drinking and cooking，飲用水及做飯用的水是特殊分開(kāi)儲(chǔ)藏的，因?yàn)樗麄冎利}水會(huì)毀掉他們的身體，所以不可能是管道的鉛進(jìn)入人體

　　解題思路

　　范文范文:

　　Both the reading and the listening discuss about the reason why Franklin’s sailors died. The reading argues that the lead in canned food is not the cuplrit, while the lecturer casts doubt on this viewpoint.

　　First, as the reading suggests, lead is only used in the surface while the food is inside of the can, therefore it could not impose any effect on the food. However, the listening points out since the can-producing workers are busy and tired, the lead could be leaked into the food because workers’ carelessness and fatigue.

　　Second, the reading mentions that there is no other report If it is lead causing the poisonous process, other eaters could have reported more than one case. On the contrary, the lecturer refutes that since nobody got checked regarding the lead concentration, it is hard to report. The typical symptom of leading poisoning is headache, which is so common that it would be construed as the symptoms of other diseases. Other workers might have accumulated ample concentrations of lead that have not reached the tipping point of death.

　　Third, the reading passage suggests another possible contributor is the water cleaning system made of lead. On the other hand, the lecturer claims that the cleaning system is there for the machine and not for drinking or cooking. Cooking and drinking water are separately stored because sailors are fully aware of the detriments of drinking saulty water. Therefore, it is not likely that the lead of the pipes caused the problem.