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　　2021年11月21日托福寫作回憶和解析含范文  本文由培頓 教育北京學校王辰老師整理提供，本次托福寫作綜合點評：綜合部分是一道15年的老題，難度不大。獨立部分是今年家考真題，難度較大。

　　綜合寫作

　　話題分類歷史類

　　考題回憶總論點Mary Celeste船上的人員消失的原因。

　　閱讀部分閱讀給出三個原因：

　　1. 被海盜劫持了。

　　2. 船上載著桶裝的易燃液體，易燃液體泄露。因為害怕爆炸，船員逃到救生艇上，然后遭遇了事故。

　　3. 船有沉沒的危險，他們棄船逃生。

　　聽力部分1. 沒有人來索取贖金，而且船上沒有任何東西丟失，這不像是劫持。

　　2. 如果是易燃液體泄露，那應該有味道，但是并沒有相關的記載。

　　3. 海員們經驗豐富，可以判斷出船還能航行一段時間，而且坐船去鄰近的島比坐救生艇要安全很多。

　　解題思路傳統四段式寫作，每一段閱讀內容+聽力內容。

　　參考范文The reading passage and the lecture both talk about what happened to people on the Mary Celeste. The reading passage mentions three theories, while the lecture maintains that none of them is convincing.

　　To begin with, according to the passage, the sailors on the Mary Celeste might be attacked and captured by pirates. However, the lecture indicates that no one ever came forward to demand money for the captain and the sailors of Mary Celeste, and almost nothing from the Mary Celeste was missing. Both of these show that the ship was not attacked by pirates.

　　Secondly, to quote the passage, the flammable liquid stored in the barrels might have leaked during the voyage, and for fear of explosion, the captain and the crew escaped to the lifeboat and encountered an accident. Unlike described in the passage, the lecturer argues that sailors who discovered the Mary Celeste did not make any records of the strong smell which could be caused by the leakage of the flammable liquid, which means that there is very little evidence that the barrels had actually leaked the liquid.

　　Finally, as the author argues, the captain and the crew were likely to use the lifeboat to reach the nearby island of Santa Maria, for they might have determined that the ship was in danger of sinking. Quite the contrary, the lecturer maintains that as experienced sailors, the captain and the crew members would have recognized that the ship was still able to travel for at least a few days, and they would use the ship instead of the lifeboat if they wanted to travel to a nearby island, because traveling on the ship was far safer.