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　　大陸雅思大作文7分范文：家長給孩子很大壓力，題目大意：如今有的父母為孩子成才給孩子施加很大壓力，原因是什么？對孩子是利還是弊？在審題時，要注意關鍵詞pressure on their children to succeed 和 development for children，分析原因時，應該注意父母試壓和望子成龍這兩者之間的必然聯系；而在分析影響時，要注意父母的壓力、望子成龍和對孩子成長的利弊者三者間的邏輯必然性。

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　　The past decades have witnessed an impending trend that parents impose more pressure on children’s development. While this conundrum may be the outcome of complex causal configurations that act conjointly, I would see it as the consequence of adults’ expectation for their offspring’s career prospects, and I would see the phenomenon from a negative perspective.

　　The first causation to realize is parents’ preferred supposition about children’s needs. From adults’ perspective, career success is the most important goal of life, which hinges on academic performance since childhood. That explains why more and more parents opt to add more pressure on children’s study. Adding to this point is the apprehension about peer pressure. Few parents can afford to see their beloved little ones be placed at a disadvantage in school competition, thus leading to them begin children’s schooling as early as possible, just to gain an advantage over other students.

　　As for the implications of the increased parental pressure, it is difficult for me to see it as anything other than a curse on younger generations’ seeking for the true meaning of life. Those championing this trend may point to its relevance to children’s future success in academic performance or career; however, they are oblivious to the factor that the supposed success may not necessarily bring children happiness. By contrast, next generations reared in such a stress to succeed may miss out on their true aptitudes for other passions, whether it be the arts or sports; some children may find life more meaningful in helping others rather than excelling in schools or workplaces.

　　From what has been discussed above, I would conclude therefore, the parental pressure on the next generations to succeed is caused by adults’ preferred supposition about children’s future, and it would cause children’s missing out on their true aspirations for life.

　　相關詞匯和語法結構

　　conundrum  問題

　　apprehension  擔心

　　champion  支持

　　aptitude  天賦

　　passion  激情