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托福考試獨立寫作賞析范文分享，本次考試綜合評價：8月21日的寫作部分難度中等。獨立部分雖然題目較難，但在去年考試中重復了3次，分別在8月，9月家考托福和12月12日線下托福中考過。

　　獨立寫作

　　話題分類社會類

　　考題回憶Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

　　The most important problems affecting the society could be solved probably during your life time.

　　解題思路本題屬于看上去比較難的題目，首先如何界定“the most important problems”, 以及需要界定“during your life time”. 后者比較好界定，就是未來幾十年到一百年。影響社會的重要問題聽上去很宏觀，其實不過是我們在政府/社會類常見的一些話題：教育，環保，扶貧等，因此可以拆分解題。

　　主體段1：環境問題不能在有生之年解決。可以用段內讓步展開：盡管有了一些高科技，但是，有一些環境問題很可能是不可逆的，比如水平面上升，冰蓋融化等溫室效應；此外，新能源技術還遠遠不成熟，這導致人們還會持續使用traditional energy, 破壞環境。

　　主體段2：貧富差距還會繼續擴大。有錢的階層會有更多的錢投入在孩子的教育上，從而讓他們有更好的發展，這樣形成一個良性循環；而貧困階層不能享受優質教育資源，從而在社會上沒有競爭優勢，進而很難脫離貧困。

　　參考范文The remarkable and monumental changes in technology bring about not only a prosperous society but also rapid changes in people’s attitudes toward future development. Some people hold an incredibly optimistic view that most of our important issues, ranging from environmental pollution to poverty alleviation, will be tackled in the near future. However, when we examine the issue closely, we may find that it is impossible to solve important issues within our life time even we have high technology now.

　　First, people can’t solve the problem of the damage to the environment. Indeed, the accelerated development of technology gives us a glimpse of hope that we can soon reverse what we have done to our environment. Unfortunately, the truth is: some changes are widespread, rapid, and intensifying, unprecedented in thousands of years. As United Nations said in a new report, rising seas, melting ice caps, and other effects of a warming climate may be irreversible for centuries and unequivocally driven by greenhouse-gas emission from human activity. Without rapid reductions in emissions, global temperatures could rise more and cause terrible consequences. Then, can we reduce the emission of carbon dioxide and other harmful gas within a few decades? I don’t think so. There are still many issues regarding the wide application of new energy, such as the potential risks of nuclear leakage, the limitation caused by weather while adopting wind energy, and so forth, making it implausible to replace the consumption of traditional energy like coal and fossil fuel. In addition, some more complicated issues, like the dilemma of the pursuit of economic prosperity and environmental conservation, and conflicts among international joint efforts, are all impeding the process of fighting for a better environment.

　　Second, the gap between the rich and the poor will become worse rather than being solved in a lifetime. Currently, for those people who are rich, they gain better education since they were children. Specifically, they can go to learn some extracurricular lessons, such as calculus, psychology, music, painting, and so on. What is more, their parents have the ability to guide and arrange their path with an insightful direction. Also, these people coming from richer families have better opportunities for jobs, as their parents and other family members have their networks, which support their children. In this way, rich people will get richer, and a virtuous cycle will form. By contrast, for those who come from underprivileged families, they don’t have the benefit that rich people have. Their education doesn’t reach what rich people have, which means they may just finish the nine-year compulsory education and then go to work because of no enough money for tuition. Their parents can’t help them because their parents also didn’t gain better education and have networks supporting their children in working. As a result, their situations can hardly change. Therefore, narrowing the gap between the rich and poor is quite tough. What is worse, it may become increasingly severe.

　　In conclusion, people can’t solve the important issue within a life time, because some environmental problems are irreversible and the gap between the poor and rich will become wider.

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