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雅思大作文題目：名人支持國際救助組織是好還是壞？

Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to the problem, while others think celebrities make the problem less important.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

解析&審題

本題的關鍵詞是“名人”和“國際救助組織”，問題是：如果名人對國際救助組織表示支持，這能讓人們關注到需要救助的問題，還是轉移人們的注意力？

雅思作文考題中提出的觀點多半都不是那種可以簡單同意或者反對的觀點，往往是既有合理的成分，也有不合理的成分，這就需要烤鴨自己去分析其合理和不合理的地方，并結合自己的經歷進行分析。

雖然雅思考試并不一味反對那些“一邊倒”的作文，但那些能體現出“批判性思維”的作文顯然更受考官的喜愛。簡單地說，“批判性思維”就是能在別人肯定的觀點中找出不合理的因素，而在別人否定的觀點中找出合理的因素。這種寫法對很多中國烤鴨來說很有挑戰性，因為中國學生已經習慣于背誦被人給出的答案，而不是自己去分析思考。

本題中，我們需要回答：名人如果支持國際救助組織，這是好還是壞？可能有些同學直接就回答，這當然是好事！但如果大家再仔細想想，名人有多種多樣，有些名人就是純娛樂明星，他們來參和國際救助組織這樣嚴肅的事情，會不會適得其反呢？另外，還有些名人根本沒有實際行動，只是動動嘴皮，這樣的名人加入國際救助組織，效果會怎么樣呢？因此，在本題中，如果我們把“名人”進行分類討論，那我們的結論就會與主流觀點不同了，于是也就形成了“批判性思維”。

以下是培頓教育的高分范文，大家可認真閱讀，看老師是如何把以上思路落實到具體文字表達的。

老師筆記

01

Today, more and more famous people find themselves in international aid campaigns. Some people believe it is certainly good to the aid programs, while others argue that it actually makes the general public less attentive to the campaigns themselves. To my mind, celebrities can be of great help to such campaigns.

今天，越來越多的名人參加國際援助活動。一些人認為這對援助計劃無疑是有益的，而另一些人則認為這實際上會降低公眾對援助活動的關注度。在我看來，名人對這類活動有很大幫助。

解析

（1）先提出話題（名人參加國際援助活動），然后重述題目觀點，并給出自己的觀點。

（2）Be attentive to… 關注……

（3）To my mind 在我看來

（4）Celebrity 名人

02

Obviously, international charity groups can take advantage of the publicity of those famous people. They can draw more media attention and make more people recognize the importance of a certain issue. For this reason, with celebrities cutting in, the international aid organizations can publicize their programs more effectively. At the same time, the viewing public, especially fans, will answer the appeal of their favorite stars and take concrete action such as donating money to help deal with problems in other countries.

顯然，國際慈善團體可以利用這些名人的曝光度。它們可以吸引更多的媒體關注，使更多的人認識到某個問題的重要性。因此，隨著名人的加入，國際援助組織可以更有效地宣傳他們的項目。同時，觀眾，尤其是粉絲，也會回應他們最喜愛的明星的號召，采取具體行動，如捐錢幫助解決其他國家的問題。

解析

（1）本段論述名人加入救助組織的好處：增加曝光度，利用名人的影響來影響大眾。

（2）Charity 慈善

（3）Take advantage of 利用

（4）Draw media attention 吸引媒體關注

（5）For this reason 因此

（6）Cut in 切入

（7）Appeal 號召

（8）Take concrete action 采取實際行動

（9）Donate 捐獻

03

Nevertheless, the involvement of famous stars in aid campaigns is not always helpful. We have seen many cases in which the public forget all about the people in need when they are cheering for their stars. Indeed, some entertainment stars can make the aid campaigns less serious than they are supposed to be. Besides, some irresponsible celebrities could even arouse negative attitudes of the public. What effect can it bring about when a celebrity asks people to give aid to the poverty-stricken children while he lives a luxurious life without giving away a dollar himself?

然而，著名明星參與援助活動并不總是有益的。我們看到過許多這樣的情況：當人們為他們的明星歡呼時，他們會全然忘記那些需要幫助的人。事實上，一些娛樂明星可能使援助活動沒有了理應的那份嚴肅。此外，一些不負責任的名人甚至可能引起公眾的負面態度。當一個名人要求人們幫助貧困兒童，而他自己卻生活奢侈也不捐獻一分錢的時候，會產生什么效果呢？

解析

（1）本段主要論述名人參加救助活動可能帶來的負面影響，注意這里共討論了三種情況：人們見到明星忘記了“初心”；娛樂明星讓救助活動顯得不甚嚴肅；不負責任的明星甚至帶來負面影響。

（2）Involvement 參與；卷入

（3）People in need 貧窮的人；需要幫助的人

（4）Entertainment stars 娛樂明星

（5）Be supposed to do… 應該做……

（6）Poverty-stricken 貧窮的

（7）Luxurious 奢侈的

（8）Give away 捐獻

04

In my view, although celebrities participating in aid programs may bring some undesirable influences, I believe they are more useful than negative.  Of course, the famous people, in order to set a positive example for the general public who love them, should make sincere efforts to help those people in need rather than just pay lip services.

在我看來，雖然參加援助計劃的名人可能會帶來一些不良影響，但我相信他們的用處要大于消極之處。當然，為了給愛他們的大眾樹立一個積極的榜樣，名人應該真誠地努力幫助那些需要幫助的人，而不僅僅是口頭說說。

解析

（1）總結前面的主要觀點，并提出建議。

（2）Participate in 參加

（3）Undesirable 不良的，不好的

（4）Set an example for… 為……樹立榜樣

（5）Pay lip services 口頭說說

7分范文

Today, more and more famous people find themselves in international aid campaigns. Some people believe it is certainly good to the aid programs, while others argue that it actually makes the general public less attentive to the campaigns themselves. To my mind, celebrities can be of great help to such campaigns.

Obviously, international charity groups can take advantage of the publicity of those famous people. They can draw more media attention and make more people recognize the importance of a certain issue. For this reason, with celebrities cutting in, the international aid organizations can publicize their programs more effectively. At the same time, the viewing public, especially fans, will answer the appeal of their favorite stars and take concrete action such as donating money to help deal with problems in other countries.

Nevertheless, the involvement of famous stars in aid campaigns is not always helpful. We have seen many cases in which the public forget all about the people in need when they are cheering for their stars. Indeed, some entertainment stars can make the aid campaigns less serious than they are supposed to be. Besides, some irresponsible celebrities could even arouse negative attitudes of the public. What effect can it bring about when a celebrity asks people to give aid to the poverty-stricken children while he lives a luxurious life without giving away a dollar himself?

In my view, although celebrities participating in aid programs may bring some undesirable influences, I believe they are more useful than negative.  Of course, the famous people, in order to set a positive example for the general public who love them, should make sincere efforts to help those people in need rather than just pay lip services.

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建議背誦的句子

1. Some people believe it is certainly good to the aid programs, while others argue that it actually makes the general public less attentive to the campaigns themselves.

一些人認為這對援助計劃無疑是有益的，而另一些人則認為這實際上會降低公眾對援助活動的關注度。

2. For this reason, with celebrities cutting in, the international aid organizations can publicize their programs more effectively.

因此，隨著名人的加入，國際援助組織可以更有效地宣傳他們的項目。

3. We have seen many cases in which the public forget all about the people in need when they are cheering for their stars.

我們看到過許多這樣的情況：當人們為他們的明星歡呼時，他們會全然忘記那些需要幫助的人。

4. What effect can it bring about when a celebrity asks people to give aid to the poverty-stricken children while he lives a luxurious life without giving away a dollar himself?

當一個名人要求人們幫助貧困兒童，而他自己卻生活奢侈也不捐獻一分錢的時候，會產生什么效果呢？

5. Of course, the famous people, in order to set a positive example for the general public who love them, should make sincere efforts to help those people in need rather than just pay lip services.

當然，為了給愛他們的大眾樹立一個積極的榜樣，名人應該真誠地努力幫助那些需要幫助的人，而不僅僅是口頭說說。