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4月13日雅思大作文題目：Some people believe famous people's support for international aid organizations draws the attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important.Discuss both of the views and give your opinion.

寫作范文及解析

That celebrities speak for charitable (慈善的）organizations is commonplace （常見的）. Although some people worry that the attention is paid to those stars rather than the issues, the actual case is the opposite of the concern. The celebrities’ stardom （明星光環(huán)/地位） is often well utilized （使xxx發(fā)揮作用）and successfully directs people’s attention to the problems. [措辭上避開第一人稱的討論更顯客觀]

[行文：先讓步討論反方的想法] It is reasonable to have the concern that people and the media may be off-topic when they see celebrities. People, especially the fans, are likely to be curious about the stars’ personal lives and careers or interested in other things, such as their styles, and the media, especially the tabloids （報道花邊新聞的小報）, often consider it as their job to find gossip. [行文：然后轉(zhuǎn)折討論反方想法的漏洞] However, it is only when celebrities make appearances as pure entertainers that the public and the media pay attention to those matters. [強調(diào)句：only when引導的（時間）條件狀語被強調(diào)] People are rational （理智的） when they see the stars are ambassadors （代言人/形象大使）of charitable activities. [行文：必要時舉例詮釋道理] For example, when a famous actor speaks for the starving （挨餓的） children in some impoverished （貧窮的）areas of the world [注意對應(yīng)題目中的international], people are more likely to find the issue serious than to find the star adorable （討喜的）. [討論對方漏洞的時候，其實往往也是討論自己的立場的合理性]

As a matter of fact, famous performers and athletes [通過細化人群來換詞] can direct people’s attention to the problems first because their high social status enables them to be credible and persuasive （有說服力的）. [然后細化解釋] In others words, when the celebrities are concerned about the sufferings （痛苦的遭遇） and misery （悲慘）of some disadvantaged groups （弱勢群體） or victims, people tend to follow them out of their faith （信任/信心）in the stars [講清楚“為什么”]. In addition, since these charitable establishments know their jobs are serious missions, they are careful with their choice of endorsers （支持者）. They have abundant （豐富的） experience in finding the most appropriate ambassadors—stars who have few scandals （丑聞） and stars who would not create the excessive impression of amusement （n. 惹人發(fā)笑）or entertainment. As desired, people’s eye is often caught by the problems instead of the celebrities themselves.

In conclusion, it is normal that some people are concerned about the deviation （n. 偏離） of the public’s attention. However, they do not need to be [語法：省略（重復(fù)的）]. In fact, famous people's advocate （n. (公開)支持） for international aid organizations can successfully draw the attention to problems.