又見地圖題,不慌不著急。2019年1月19日雅思小作文題目

國內(A類):地圖題
本場雅思小作文高分范文
The maps illustrate the present conditions of a particular field in the UK and the proposed changes of the field for the purpose of reducing traffic accidents.
筆者決定按照從西往東,即平面圖上的從左到右,的順序展開寫作→ In terms of the horizontal road, the west intersection, where accidents currently happen at each of the four corners, will no longer expect accidents as traffic lights will be installed at each corner. ←寫完西頭寫東頭,考慮邏輯連接詞,筆者覺得meanwhile挺合適→ Meanwhile, a major change will happen to the two intersections that are near the east end. ←由于變化比較大比較復雜,筆者決定用先總寫再分寫細節的方式展開寫作內容→ To be specific, where the roads meet, the streams of traffic will flow into a roundabout, and with this change, it is expected that there will be no traffic accidents. The other dramatic difference is that the road that starts at the school and goes southeast will no longer extend further but stop immediately after it passes the hotel. ←先寫完道路本身的情況,再用“換句話說”的方式,說明這條路和別的路的關系發生的變化→ In other words, the road will not intersect with the northeast-southwest road, and 用說明結果的方式,講一下交通事故的發生率的變化→ as a result, no traffic accidents are expected since the current meeting point will be removed.
Overall, 先宏觀描述整體情況→ the general pattern of the roads will remain the way it is now, 再描述重要細節→ and where the change will be made, the incidence of traffic accidents is predicted to be eliminated.
Cambridge Past Papers
Vol.13 Test 1
高分范文
The two maps illustrate how road access to the hospital in 2010 was different from it was in 2007.
One difference, most distinguishing, was the addition of a car park. In 2010, the original shared car park became exclusive for the hospital’s staff, and the public could use the new car park, which was located east of the hospital building and accessible from Ring Road, to access the hospital via the east entrance, an entry point that was also new.
In addition, Hospital Road, going south to east to the hospital, had a makeover in 2010, also noticeably. First, the six bus stops on both sides of the road were removed. Second, there were two roundabouts at each end of the road and a bus station sitting on the road’s west side. In addition, as the roundabouts and the stations were connected, visitors could exit or enter the station from either roundabout.
Overall, access to the city hospital changed enormously, and the hospital became more accessible in 2010.







