2021年4月21日托福寫作真題機經回憶和解析【獨立寫作】,本文由培頓 教育上海學校吳越老師提供,綜合點評,這次托福考試寫作部分整體難度適中,綜合寫作是新的考題,獨立寫作有出現過類似的題目。其中,綜合寫作考查威脅熊貓生存的三個問題。
獨立寫作考察學生在上大學的時候,父母在給孩子建議的時候,是建議孩子選擇感興趣的專業還是會有高薪水但是不是最感興趣的工作呢。

獨立寫作
話題分類教育類
考題回憶Many students starting university must choose a major (main field of study at university), and parents of these students often give them advice about which major to choose. Some parents tell students to choose the major that most interests the students. Other parents tell students that it is best to choose a major that will lead to a job with a high salary, even if that major may not be the one that most interests the students.
Which approach do you believe is better and why?
解題思路
寫作思路:
要點:教育類的話題,需要父母給孩子一些建議,可以從幾個角度出發,孩子本身,家長本身,以及專業本身。
觀點:agree
1.從孩子的角度
(1)孩子選擇自己感興趣的專業,在學習的時候就會充滿熱情和動力,自然會取得好成績。
(2)行行出狀元,只要孩子在感興趣的專業做到最好,以后一定也能找到一份薪水還不錯的工作
2.從家長的角度
(1)鼓勵孩子鼓勵孩子去選擇喜歡的專業,有利于孩子的身心健康成長,以及家庭關系和睦。
(2)家長最在乎的是孩子的快樂成長和快樂學習,興趣是最好的老師。
3.讓步:選擇以后可以導向高薪的工作固然很重要,因為高薪水可以給孩子帶來高質量的生活,孩子同樣可以在高薪和高消費里感受快樂。但是選擇自己感興趣的領域,能帶來持續的精神享受和物質享受。
參考范文范文:
College is often regarded as an important turning point in life, People assume what they study in college will determine their future earnings. A dilemma lies between choosing a major that will translate to a job with descent pay and choosing a major one is truly interested in. between the two choices, one should lean towards the major he finds attracted towards because he will invest himself into learning and excel in such an area to earn an adequate amount anyways.
Choosing a major that is assumed to earn well is unnecessary because people who are the best in the majors they are interested in can also be wealthy. One of the most popular majors currently is economics. Many students choose economics not because of their passion for it, but because they assume understanding how the economy works will make them a good player in the system. However, many students later lose interest in economics and no longer strive in such an are, making their choice of a high salary major useless. On the other hand, if the student chose a major he enjoys but is not considered a high salary job such as pottery, and became the best potter around town, he will be well-paid. Regardless of the area, people can depend on it to earn a living if they can do well.
Students will work harder adn earn better grades in their interested areas compared to those who are forced to study majors with good returns, People cannot devote themselves to work in areas they do not care about it. If an art student is pressured to study astrophysics, a discipline considered to be the hope of future generations, he will fail to understand the creation of stars because his minds is wondering in the starry night of Van Gogh. The same art student will stand out in art major because he feels motivated to learn more about the art world. Coercively pushing a student away from their interest will result in poor results because they cannot focus fully on the high-salary major.
Students should choose to study topics they gravitate towards because they are more likely to feel motivated to learn about this area, and thus become the best in their area to earn well.
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