托福考試獨立寫作范文分享-教育成長類 這次托福考試寫作部分整體難度適中,獨立寫作都是重復(fù)之前的考題。其中,綜合寫作考查動物類,整體難度適中,生僻詞匯較少。
獨立寫作考查生活類話題,難度適中,重復(fù)2013/7/20號考題,學生在備考過程中有關(guān)此類話題基本都會涉及這一題。

獨立寫作
話題分類教育成長類,(重復(fù)2013/7/20)
考題回憶Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "Parents now spend too much time on determining the future things of their children; children should be allowed to make their own choices."
解題思路
寫作思路:
觀點:選擇應(yīng)該讓孩子自己做未來的決定,但是父母應(yīng)該給與一定幫助
正方論點:孩子自己做決定可以使他們掌握更多技巧,敢于面對挑戰(zhàn),職業(yè)發(fā)展的好。
讓步段:父母也應(yīng)該給與一定的指導和幫助,也就是在孩子做決定的時候,父母的角色是輔助孩子。
參考范文范文:
Nowadays parents are increasingly concerned about their children’s development, spending too much time on determining the uncertain future of their children. This phenomenon is prevalent in society. However, more wisely, parents, in my opinion, should allow children to make their own choices for the future, but some necessary parental assistance should be given.
Making a decision by children themselves helps children to acquire skills better, which make them face challenges bravely for better career advancement. In this society full of competition, children should be equipped with enough experience and ability to survive and thrive in the future. If the children can decide what they desire to do, their development is likely to reach the highest level within their possibility. For example, my friend Jim, on the basis of his strengths, had the freedom to opt for a desired university for a dream major. He did spare no efforts to spend time and energy on the major, mastering relevant expertise and doing research into his field. After graduation, amid the fierce competition on the job market, he came out top by virtue of the solid foundation laid in his university years. Working with an international company, he has been recently promoted to a marketing manager with a decent salary and perks, in that he can handle numerous complicated issues through what he has learned.
However, it is advisable for parents to offer some timely help if necessary. The children, especially those who have come of age, are psychologically immature or impetuous when they have to make a choice for their future. The parents, as it were, should give children some liberty but cannot go as far as to sit idle without doing anything. In some cases, children’s making a choice is not as easy as it seems, which might lead to some fearsome consequences beyond their calculation or prediction. It is on such an occasion that parents should be considerate and have a liberal attitude, affording some guidance and pointing out the potential problems. Through the discussion between parents and children, the children’s options can be practical and wise---for instance, a middle school student can avoid detours by not choosing something which is obviously unsuitable for his quality and talent. In this sense, the role the parents are playing is highly appropriate.
In conclusion, it is better to give children autonomy to decide future development by themselves, so that what they do is to theirtaste and helps to unlock their potential. In spite of this, parents also should assist children to have a clear orientation, guiding them through the turmoil of life.






