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本次托福考試綜合點評
這次托福考試寫作部分整體難度適中,獨立寫作考題,是經常出現的一個題目。
其中,綜合寫作考查動物環境類,整體難度適中。

綜合寫作
話題分類動物環境類
考題回憶總論點象牙嘴woodpecker幾十年前被認為已經滅絕了,但是最近又發現它們仍然存在,并且有photos和sound為證。
閱讀部分分論點一:實際上是另外一種woodpecker,它們很像,從照片中不能分辨它們的特征
分論點二:科學家沒有發現woodpecker的nest,所以缺少evidence。
分論點三:那些聲音可能是其他鳥類的叫聲,也可能是woodpecker大聲敲擊樹木,顯示領地,所以無法與槍聲分辨。
聽力部分分論點一:拍攝birds之間的differentiation有一定的難度。拍攝者是專業的birds experts,他們親眼看到區別,不可能認錯。
分論點二:這種birds的種群密度很低,占據空間廣,nests間隔在25平方公里的范圍,所以在大森林里搜尋不到很正常。
分論點三:birds的聲音很特別,不可能是其他species的birds,而且那一帶人很少,不會是gunshots聲音。
解題思路閱讀部分
1. 另外一種woodpecker
2. 沒發現nest
3.其他birds或者gunshot
聽力部分
1. 拍攝differentiation有難度,experts親眼區分
2. birds占據空間廣,找不到很正常
3. birds聲音特別,不是別的birds或gunshot聲音
參考范文范文:
Both the reading and the listening discuss about ivory-billed woodpecker. The reading raises three arguments to prove that the picture might be another kind of woodpecker, while the lecturer holds a viewpoint that they still exist with the proof of photographs and sound even if they were thought to be extinct several decades ago.
First, as the reading suggests, it is another kind of woodpecker and they resemble each other, so scientists cannot differentiate the difference between them. However, the listening points out that taking the photograph of the differentiation between birds is difficult, and birds experts observe them in person so it should be real.
Second, the reading mentions that scientists cannot find the nest of woodpeckers so it lacks evidence. The listening, on the other hand, argues that the density of these birds species are low and they occupy a large space, therefore it is very common that you cannot find a woodpecker nest.
Third, the reading passage suggests that those sounds could be the calls of other birds, or woodpeckers tapping loudly on trees to show territory, so they're indistinguishable from gunshots. On the contrary, the lecturer argues that the sound of this bird is very special and it will not be other bird species, meanwhile there are very few people and it cannot be gunshots.
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