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話題分類教育類和國家發展類
考題回憶Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Improving schools is the most important factor for the successful development of a country.
解題思路重復2021年5月22日的考試
寫作思路:
要點:同意或者反對都可以。選擇同意的一方,就寫improving schools 的優點,對于國家的successful development有什么貢獻。比如原因一教育是國家發展的基石。九年義務教育和高中教育為學生提供基本的社會生存必備知識技能。原因二是高等教育為國家選拔人才,對國家長足發展和創新科技提供支持。然后加一個讓步轉折段,寫一個國家的成功發展是由多方面因素相輔相成的,但是基于上述講到的優點,還是覺得improving schools 是最重要的因素。選擇反對的一方就兩個原因段寫其他因素對國家成功發展更加重要,再加一個讓步轉折段說improving schools很重要,但不是最重要的。
觀點:同意
1. Education is the foundation of a country. Compulsory education and high school education provide basic knowledge for students.
(1)九年義務教育和高中教育為學生提供基本的社會生存必備知識技能,比如語數外政史地和理化生的基礎知識, 以及美術音樂體育等強身健體和美學欣賞的全面發展。
2. Higher education selects professional talents for the country, providing support for the sustainable and successful development as well as the innovative technology
(1)高等教育為國家選拔人才,對國家長足發展和創新科技提供支持,比如語言學、教育學、國際貿易、金融、IT、汽車制造等專業學習.
3.讓步轉折的結尾段
一個國家的成功發展是由多方面因素相輔相成的,比如經濟發展、外交關系、自然因素、科學技術等,但是基于上述講到的優點,還是覺得improving schools 是最重要的因素。
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Nowadays, every country is considering how to successfully develop their country and gain better international status. There are many factors influencing the successful development of a country. Some people believe that education is the most important element, while others believe that there are other more crucial factors. From my perspective, I do insist that education is the most important factor for the successful development of a country.
Education is the foundation of a country. Compulsory education and high school education provide basic knowledge for students. Primary school and junior high school students are able to learn basic Math, Chinese, English, politics, history, geography, physics, chemistry and biology. These subjects provide basic skills for students to understand the function and the blueprint of the world. And they are able to survive in the world by learning how to communicate with others, calculate numbers, bargain with shop owners and discuss the national politics and history with family and friends. As Bacon said, Histories make men wise; poets witty; the mathematics subtle; natural philosophy deep; moral grave; logic and rhetoric able to contend. Students will not only learn these knowledge but also learn music, arts and sports. Besides, music cultivates their aesthetic values and sports strengthen their bodies. Fundamentally, the country is consisted of citizens so that successful education for young students contributes to the successful development of a country.
Higher education selects professional talents for the country, providing support for the sustainable and successful development as well as the innovative technology. In order for the country to develop successfully, the government must progress technology innovation. And the innovation largely initiates from higher education experiment, laboratory and library. Many prestigious universities receive a large amount of money from the government every year for the purpose of cultivating talents and progressing majors. Take different majors as examples, language majors foster future teachers, interpreters and diplomatists for the country. Mathematics train future scientists and statistic analysts for the society. Financing majors cultivate businessmen, investors and entrepreneurs for future development of a country. Internet technology majors cultivate programmers for companies and the society. These professional talents coming from the higher education contribute a lot to the success of a country in turn.
Admittedly, a successful development of a country is composed of various elements, such as economic development, diplomatic relations, natural elements and technological skills. However, based on the reasons and examples mentioned above, I still believe that education is the most important factor for the successful development of a country.
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