雅思大作文|原因分析題型電影話(huà)題,附考官范文精讀+解析今天我們來(lái)看一篇大作文,題目是:Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be?Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?
為什么人們更喜歡外國(guó)電影?政府應(yīng)該支持本土電影嗎?
這種題目叫“Two-Part Question”,并且建議大家這種文章要寫(xiě)成四段,每段具體內(nèi)容:
1. Introduction: topic + general answer to both questions
2. Answer the first question
3. Answer the second question
4. Conclusion: paraphrase the answer you gave in the introduction

Introduction 段可以只寫(xiě)兩句,第一句引入主題,第二句表明立場(chǎng)。如:It is true that foreign films are more popular in many countries than domestically produced films. There could be several reasons why this is the case, and I believe that governments should promote local film-making by subsidizing the industry.
第二段和第三段為主體段落,建議大家每段各寫(xiě)五句話(huà),寫(xiě)之前大家可以發(fā)散一下思維,簡(jiǎn)要列出每一句的論據(jù)分別寫(xiě)什么。
下面是每段的大綱:
First main paragraph:
Why could this be?
1. Topic sentence - several reasons
2. First reason - budgets for action, special effects, spectacular locations
3. Example - Hollywood blockbusters like Avatar or James Bond films
4. Second reason - the most famous actors, actresses and directors
5. Final reason - poor quality local filmmaking in many countries
Second main paragraph:
Should governments give financial support?
1. Topic sentence - governments should support local film industries
2. Explain why - talented local film-makers need opportunities
3. Explain more - they need money to pay film crews, actors etc.
4. Explain consequences - would lead to employment, income, tourism
5. Example - invent an example about your country!
想好這五點(diǎn)之后,就很容易把這五句話(huà)串連成一個(gè)段落了,來(lái)看看 如何將大綱中的詞匯短語(yǔ)轉(zhuǎn)化成一個(gè)個(gè)完整的句子的:
There are several reasons why many people find foreign films more enjoyable than the films produced in their own countries. Firstly, the established film industries in certain countries have huge budgets for action, special effects and to shoot scenes in spectacular locations. Hollywood blockbusters like ‘Avatar’ or the James Bond films are examples of such productions, and their global appeal is undeniable. Another reason why these big-budget films are so successful is that they often star the most famous actors and actresses, and they are made by the most accomplished producers and directors. The poor quality, low-budget filmmaking in many countries suffers in comparison.
結(jié)論段是這樣寫(xiě)的:In conclusion, I believe that increased financial support could help to raise the quality of locallymade films and allow them to compete with the foreign productions that currently dominate the market.
我們可以看出:
1,結(jié)論段是在改述 Introduction 段;
2,他在結(jié)論段中有改兩個(gè) Part 的順序——先說(shuō) Financial Support 再說(shuō)外國(guó)電影的流行。對(duì)于不知道結(jié)尾段落該寫(xiě)什么的同學(xué),這兩點(diǎn)可以是非常好的借鑒。
完整版的滿(mǎn)分作文供大家參考背誦:
It is true that foreign films are more popular in many countries than domestically produced films.
There could be several reasons why this is the case, and I believe that governments should promote local film-making by subsidizing the industry.
There are various reasons why many people find foreign films more enjoyable than the films produced in their own countries. Firstly, the established film industries in certain countries have huge budgets for action, special effects and to shoot scenes in spectacular locations. Hollywood blockbusters like ‘ Avatar ’ or the James Bond films are examples of such productions, and their global appeal is undeniable. Another reason why these big-budget films are so successful is that they often star the most famous actors and actresses, and they are made by the most accomplished producers and directors. The poor quality, low-budget filmmaking in many countries suffers.
in my view, governments should support local film industries financially. In every country, there may be talented amateur film-makers who just need to be given the opportunity to prove themselves. To compete with big-budget productions from overseas, these people need money to pay for film crews, actors and a host of other costs related to producing high-quality films. If governments did help with these costs, they would see an increase in employment in the film industry, income from film sales, and perhaps even a rise in tourist numbers. New Zealand, for example, has seen an increase in tourism related to the 'Lord of the Rings' films, which were partly funded by government subsidies.
In conclusion, I believe that increased financial support could help to raise the quality of locally made films and allow them to compete with the foreign productions that currently dominate the market.
(294 words, band 9)







