托福考試綜合寫作回憶和解析含范文,本文由培頓 教育 老師整理點評,本次托福考試寫作部分的綜合點評:本次綜合寫作不是常規的聽力反駁閱讀的題型,而是少見的“現象證明類”題型,值得關注。獨立寫作屬于政府社會類話題,是老題,難度不大。

綜合寫作
話題分類生物類
考題回憶總論點一種叫guillemot的鳥的蛋非常unique。
閱讀部分喝牛奶不好:1. 這種鳥的蛋很花,但是不知道原因;2. 蛋很粗糙,但是不知道為什么;3. 蛋的表面很皺,但是不知道原因。
聽力部分給出原因:1. 蛋花,因為住的鳥多,為了更容易找到蛋;2. 蛋粗糙,是因為蛋的表面臟,這會讓小鳥呼吸不了,但是雨水能把臟東西沖掉,如果蛋的表面很滑就不行了;3. 蛋皺,是因為當大鳥把蛋窩在懷里的時候,shape會非常合適,這樣更能keep the egg warm。
解題思路傳統四段式寫作,每一段閱讀內容+聽力內容。
參考范文According to the passage, eggs of a kind of bird Guillemot are very unique. The lecture gives reasons for all the three attributes of the egg respectively.
For starters, to quote the passage, there are a lot of special colors and patterns on the surface ot the egg. The lecturer indicates that Guillemot lives with a lot of birds, and the colors and patterns help Guillemot identify their eggs.
In addition, the reading suggests that the surface of Guillemots’ eggs is quite rough. According to the lecture, the surface of the egg is dirty, and that can make the newly born birds unable to breathe. But the rain can wash away the dirt because the egg is rough, which cannot be realized if the surface of the egg is slippery,
Finally, it is mentioned by the writer that the surface of the egg is wrinkled. In light of the lecture, the wrinkled surface would make the shape of the egg extremely suitable when a mature Guillemot holds the egg in its arms, which would help keep the egg warm.
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